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[DOCS] Improve clarity of DBM Amazon RDS Postgres setup page#35913

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[DOCS] Improve clarity of DBM Amazon RDS Postgres setup page#35913
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Clarity improvements to the Database Monitoring setup page for Amazon RDS Postgres.

  • Split the parameters table into Required and Optional sections
  • Added explicit ### Create the explain plan function heading (was orphaned after version tabs)
  • Fixed the Postgres 9.6 "Verify" tab — it was identical to the ≥10 tab; now correctly uses function forms required for 9.6
  • Renamed verification sections for consistency: "Verify database permissions" and "Verify Agent setup"
  • Simplified the "Grant the Agent access" intro paragraph
  • Removed "Please" from the IAM authentication note
  • Fixed passive voice in auto_explain section
  • Fixed front matter typo: "Documenation""Documentation"
  • Added missing period to Troubleshooting sentence

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- Split config parameters table into Required/Optional sections
- Add explicit heading for explain plan function
- Fix 9.6 Verify tab to use function form (was identical to ≥10 tab)
- Rename sections: "Verify database permissions" and "Verify Agent setup"
- Simplify Grant intro paragraph; remove "Please" and passive voice
- Fix front matter typo: "Documenation" → "Documentation"
- Add missing period to Troubleshooting sentence

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@git-thuerk-done git-thuerk-done added the editorial review Waiting on a more in-depth review label Apr 10, 2026
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git-thuerk-done commented Apr 10, 2026

Editorial review tracked in DOCS-13973 (batch review with PRs #35912, #35914, #35915, #35916, #35917, #35918).

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LGTM!

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