docs(operations): complete CA rotation documentation#406
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Summary of ChangesHello @kvaps, I'm Gemini Code Assist1! I'm currently reviewing this pull request and will post my feedback shortly. In the meantime, here's a summary to help you and other reviewers quickly get up to speed! This pull request enhances the operational documentation for cluster management by providing comprehensive and user-friendly instructions for Certificate Authority rotation. The updates aim to clarify the process for both Talos and Kubernetes CAs, incorporating best practices like dry-run previews and explicit steps for obtaining new configuration files, thereby improving the reliability and safety of CA rotation procedures. Highlights
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Add detailed instructions for Talos and Kubernetes CA rotation, Co-Authored-By: Claude <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Andrei Kvapil <kvapss@gmail.com>
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This pull request significantly improves the documentation for CA rotation by providing clearer, step-by-step instructions for both Talos and Kubernetes CAs. The new structure with distinct dry-run steps is much easier to follow and safer for operators. I've added a few suggestions to further enhance clarity and consistency by providing specific commands for downloading new configurations and using consistent file paths as shown in other parts of the documentation.
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| talm -f nodes/node.yaml rotate-ca --talos=true --kubernetes=false |
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The filename nodes/node.yaml seems inconsistent with the talm setup guide (talm.md), which uses node-specific files like nodes/node1.yaml. To improve clarity and consistency across the documentation, consider using a more specific placeholder like nodes/node1.yaml or nodes/<your-node-file>.yaml. This comment applies to all talm commands in this file.
| talm -f nodes/node.yaml rotate-ca --talos=true --kubernetes=false | |
| talm -f nodes/node1.yaml rotate-ca --talos=true --kubernetes=false |
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| talm kubeconfig -f nodes/srv1.yaml | ||
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| After the rotation is complete, download the new `talosconfig` from the secrets. |
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The instruction "download the new talosconfig from the secrets" is a bit vague. To make the documentation more actionable for users, it would be very helpful to provide the specific command to download the new talosconfig. This would make the guide much easier to follow.
| talm -f nodes/node.yaml rotate-ca --talos=false --kubernetes=true --dry-run=false | ||
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| After the rotation is complete, download the new `kubeconfig` from the secrets. |
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The instruction "download the new kubeconfig from the secrets" could be more specific. The talm setup guide shows using talm kubeconfig to get the configuration. It would be very helpful to include the full command here to make the documentation self-contained and easier to follow. For example:
talm kubeconfig -f nodes/node1.yaml > kubeconfig
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