Updates based on the latest round of comments

* Slight wording changes in Phase 1 regarding ballot requests
* Elaborate in Phase 3 about receiving a ballot
* Small wording change around full-Council elections

Author: warsaw

peps/pep-0772.rst

@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ A Packaging Council election consists of the following phases:
 
 * **Phase 1**: Packaging Council Electors are determined by opt-in self-selection of the `PSF voting
   members <voting-members>`_.  The PSF voting membership is informed that Packaging Council ballots
-  are available, and any PSF voting member can request the ballot.  The PSF may choose to solicit
+  will be available, and any PSF voting member can request a ballot.  The PSF may choose to solicit
   participation for both the PSF Board elections and Packaging Council elections at the same time.
   Packaging Council Electors retain their voting rights for the entire year, and may exercise such
   rights for other community-wide votes that may occur during that year.
@@ -205,11 +205,11 @@ A Packaging Council election consists of the following phases:
   themselves.  Nominees do not need to be PSF members, but nominations must include information
   about the nominee's relevant affiliations.
 
-* **Phase 3**: Each Elector uses their ballot to cast their vote for the Council. They can
-  assign zero to five stars to each candidate.  Voting is performed anonymously. The outcome of the vote is
-  determined using the `STAR voting system`_, modified to use the `Multi-winner Bloc STAR`_ approach.
-  If a tie occurs, it may be resolved by mutual agreement among the candidates, or else the winner will be
-  chosen at random.
+* **Phase 3**: Each Elector receives a ballot consisting of all eligible nominees, which Electors
+  use to cast their vote for the Packaging Council. They can assign zero to five stars to each
+  candidate.  Voting is performed anonymously. The outcome of the vote is determined using the `STAR
+  voting system`_, modified to use the `Multi-winner Bloc STAR`_ approach.  If a tie occurs, it may
+  be resolved by mutual agreement among the candidates, or else the winner will be chosen at random.
 
 Each phase will last two weeks.
 
@@ -242,9 +242,10 @@ finalized until the next elections for their cohort are finalized.
 
 .. _whole-council:
 
-Only for elections involving the entire Packaging Council (such as the initial Council election), the two
-candidates receiving the highest number of votes shall be designated Cohort A with a two year term, and the
-three candidates receiving the next highest number of votes shall be designated Cohort B with a one year term.
+Only for elections of the entire Packaging Council (such as the initial Council election), the two
+candidates receiving the highest number of votes shall be designated Cohort A with a two year term,
+and the three candidates receiving the next highest number of votes shall be designated Cohort B
+with a one year term.
 
 There are no term limits for individual Council members.