Address review comments

Author: hvitved

change-notes/1.25/analysis-csharp.md

@@ -24,9 +24,10 @@ The following changes in version 1.25 affect C# analysis in all applications.
   have type parameters. This means that non-generic nested types inside construced types,
   such as `A<int>.B`, no longer are considered unbound generics. (Such nested types do,
   however, still have relevant `.getSourceDeclaration()`s, for example `A<>.B`.)
-* The data-flow library has been improved, which affects and improves most security queries. Flow
-  through methods now takes nested field reads/writes into account. For example, the library is
-  able to track flow from `"taint"` to `Sink()` via the method `GetF2F1()` in
+* The data-flow library has been improved, which affects most security queries by potentially
+  adding more results. Flow through methods now takes nested field reads/writes into account.
+  For example, the library is able to track flow from `"taint"` to `Sink()` via the method
+  `GetF2F1()` in
   ```csharp
   class C1
   {
@@ -37,13 +38,12 @@ The following changes in version 1.25 affect C# analysis in all applications.
   {
       C1 F2;
 
-
-      string GetF2F1() => this.F2.F1; // Nested field read
+      string GetF2F1() => F2.F1; // Nested field read
 
       void M()
       {
-          this.F2 = new C1() { F1 = "taint" };
-          Sink(this.GetF2F1()); // NEW: "taint" reaches here
+          F2 = new C1() { F1 = "taint" };
+          Sink(GetF2F1()); // NEW: "taint" reaches here
       }
   }
   ```

change-notes/1.25/analysis-java.md

@@ -18,9 +18,10 @@ The following changes in version 1.25 affect Java analysis in all applications.
 
 ## Changes to libraries
 
-* The data-flow library has been improved, which affects and improves most security queries. Flow
-  through methods now takes nested field reads/writes into account. For example, the library is
-  able to track flow from `"taint"` to `sink()` via the method `getF2F1()` in
+* The data-flow library has been improved, which affects most security queries by potentially
+  adding more results. Flow through methods now takes nested field reads/writes into account.
+  For example, the library is able to track flow from `"taint"` to `sink()` via the method
+  `getF2F1()` in
   ```java
   class C1 {
     String f1;