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 ## Who is Using Connective C++ Software?
 
-Chops Net IP is in use at [Sound Life Sciences](https://www.soundlifesci.com/), a Seattle startup creating awesome medical software and devices that uses high frequency sound to monitor respiration rate to detect opiod overdose and early signs of infection.
+Chops Net IP is in use at [Sound Life Sciences](https://www.soundlifesci.com/), a Seattle startup creating awesome medical software and devices using high frequency sound to monitor respiration rate. This allows detection of opiod overdose, early signs of infection, and other breathing related disorders.
 
 ## Team Bios