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Author: marionbarker

docs/build/phone.md

@@ -33,18 +33,20 @@ You need a minimum version of the mobile operating software, called the *iOS*, t
 ### iPhone 16 and InPlay DASH pods
 
 !!! warning "iPhone 16 and Omnipod DASH"
-    At the current time, some DASH pods produced in 2025 have different chips and firmware. 
+    Some of the DASH pods produced in 2025 have different chips and firmware. 
 
-    * These pods, which advertise with a Bluetooth Device name of `InPlay BLE` are fully compatible with all iPhone models except iPhone 16
+    * These pods, which advertise a Bluetooth Device name of `InPlay BLE` and indicate `-Atlas` in small print on the paper pod cover are fully compatible with all iPhone models except iPhone 16
     * Early reports indicate the `InPlay BLE` pods work fine with iPhone 17
     * Although `InPlay` pods do work with the 16 you may notice some communication issues
-        * It can take many retry attempts to get the pod to initially connect when pairing
-        * Once the pod disconnects, which it does 3 minutes after the last message exchange, it can can be slow (seconds to minutes) to reconnect
+        * It can take many attempts to get the pod to initially connect when pairing; just keep hitting retry
+        * Once the pod disconnects itself from the phone Bluetooth, the phone is slow to reconnect the pod to the *Loop* app
+            * Pod firmware initiates the disconnect 3 minutes after the last message exchange
+            * With other models, the reconnect happens in about 1 sec
+            * With iPhone 16, this can take many seconds and sometimes a few minutes
         * When the pod is not connected, neither automatic nor manual commands can be sent to the pod to modify insulin delivery
         * No solution to this issue is known (yet)
 
-    > DASH pods that advertise with a Bluetooth Device name of `TWI Board` and are fully compatible with all phones listed below.
- 
+    > DASH pods that advertise with a Bluetooth Device name of `TWI Board` and indicate `-SAW` in small print on the paper pod cover are fully compatible with all phones included the iPhone 16.
 ### Compatible Device
 
 All the devices listed below are currently compatible with Loop. They are separated by the available *iOS* for the phone. 
@@ -53,11 +55,11 @@ These phones require *iOS* 26 and `Loop version 3.8.x` or newer
 
 - iPhone 17, all variants
 
-These phones require *iOS* 18 or newer
+These phones require *iOS* 18 and are compatible with *iOS* 26
 
 - iPhone 16, all variants
 
-These phones are compatible with both *iOS* 17 and 18
+These phones are compatible with *iOS* 17, 18 and 26
 
 - iPhone 15, all variants
 - iPhone 14, all variants