incorporate reviewer comments

Author: marionbarker

docs/build/phone.md

@@ -39,14 +39,14 @@ These phones require *iOS* 26 and `Loop version 3.8.x` or newer
 - iPhone 17, all variants
 
 !!! important "iOS 26 requires `Loop v3.8.2` or newer"
-    Any iPhone 17 must run iOS 26. Changes to `Loop v3.7.x` and earlier were required to support iOS 26. These updates are found in `Loop v3.8.2` and newer.
+    Any iPhone 17 must run iOS 26. You must install `Loop v3.8.2` or newer before updating to iOS 26.  `Loop v3.7.x` and earlier do not to support iOS 26.
 
-    **Do not attempt to run an earlier version of Loop on any iOS 26 phone, use `Loop v3.8.2` or newer.**
+    **Do not attempt to run an older version of Loop on any iOS 26 phone, use `Loop v3.8.2` or newer.**
 
 These phones require *iOS* 18 and are compatible with *iOS* 26.
 
-- iPhone 16, all variants: **not recommended for use with Omnipod**
-    * iPhone 16 is compatible but see [InPlay DASH pod](../faqs/omnipod-faqs.md#iphone-16-and-atlas-or-inplay-dash-pods){: target="_blank" } warning
+- iPhone 16 is compatible but **not recommended for use with Omnipod DASH**
+    * See [InPlay DASH pod](../faqs/omnipod-faqs.md#iphone-16-and-atlas-or-inplay-dash-pods){: target="_blank" } warning
 
 These phones are compatible with *iOS* 17, 18 and 26
 

docs/faqs/new-phone.md

@@ -88,9 +88,9 @@ Some people don't have access to their old phone. There are instructions for han
 When you change phones, *Apple* will force you to the latest iOS version available for your new phone.
 
 !!! important "iOS 26 requires `Loop v3.8.2` or newer"
-    Changes to `Loop v3.7.x` and earlier were required to support iOS 26. These updates are found in `Loop v3.8.2` and newer.
+    You must install `Loop v3.8.2` or newer before updating to iOS 26.  `Loop v3.7.x` and earlier do not to support iOS 26.
 
-    **Do not attempt to run an earlier version of Loop on any iOS 26 phone, use `Loop v3.8.2` or newer.**
+    **Do not attempt to run an older version of Loop on any iOS 26 phone, use `Loop v3.8.2` or newer.**
 
 
 ### Prepare Before Upgrade