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docs/html/design/get-started/ui-overview.html

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<h2>UI Bars</h2>
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<p>The UI bars are screen areas dedicated to the display of notifications, communication of device
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status, and device navigation. Typically the UI bars are displayed concurrently with your app. Apps
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that display immersive content, such as movies or images, can temporarily hide the UI bars to allow
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the user to enjoy full screen content without distraction.</p>
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<p>The system bars are screen areas dedicated to the display of notifications, communication of device
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status, and device navigation. Typically the system bars are displayed concurrently with your app.
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Apps that display immersive content, such as movies or images, can temporarily hide the system bars
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to allow the user to enjoy full screen content without distraction.</p>
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Recents, and also displays a menu for apps written for Android 2.3 or earlier.</p>
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<h4>System Bar</h4>
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<p>Combines the status and navigation bars for display on tablet form factors.</p>
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<h4>Combined Bar</h4>
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<p>On tablet form factors the status and navigation bars are combined into a single bar at the
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bottom of the screen.</p>
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docs/html/design/patterns/app-structure.html

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Market's start screen primarily allows navigation into the stores for Apps, Music, Books, and
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Games. It is also enriched with tailored recommendations and promotions that surface content
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of interest to the user. Search is readily available from the action bar.
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Market's start screen primarily allows navigation into the stores for Apps, Music, Books,
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Movies and Games. It is also enriched with tailored recommendations and promotions that
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surface content of interest to the user. Search is readily available from the action bar.
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docs/html/design/patterns/navigation.html

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<p>The Back key also supports a few behaviors not directly tied to screen-to-screen navigation:</p>
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<li>Back dismisses contextual action bars, and removes the highlight from the selected items</li>
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<p>When navigating deep into your app's hierarchy directly from another app via an intent, Back will
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<p>The Up button is handled is follows:
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<p>The Up button is handled as follows:
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- If the destination screen is typically reached from one particular screen within your app, Up
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<p>For example, after choosing to share a book being view in Market, the user navigates directly to the
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Gmail's compose screen. From there, Up returns to the Inbox (which happens to be both the typical
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referrer to compose, as well as the topmost screen of the app), while Back returns to Market.</p>
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<p>For example, after choosing to share a book being viewed in Market, the user navigates directly to
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Gmail's compose screen. From there, Up returns to the Inbox (which happens to be both the
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typical referrer to compose, as well as the topmost screen of the app), while Back returns to
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<p>If your app was reached via the system mechanisms of notifications or home screen widgets, Up
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behaves as described for app-to-app navigation, above.</p>
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<p>For the Back key, you should make navigation more predictably by inserting into the task's back
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docs/html/design/patterns/notifications.html

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<a href="../patterns/notifications.html">Navigation</a> design pattern.</p>
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<a href="../patterns/navigation.html">Navigation</a> design pattern.</p>
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<h4>Timestamps for time sensitive events</h4>
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<p>By default, standard Android notifications include a timestamp in the upper right corner. Consider
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whether the timestamp is valuable in the context of your notification. If the timestamp is not

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