Privacy Policy v2

Author: EminGT

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                         <h3>Our Privacy Policy</h3>
-                            <p>Last updated: August 1, 2023
-                            <br><br>This privacy policy explains how your personal information is processed when using our products like the Complementary Development website, Complementary shaderpacks, and the Complementary Installer. Please also note that we may update this privacy policy from time to time for legal reasons, to improve our wording, add information about new products, and other similar reasons.</p>
+                            <p>Last updated: August 1, 2023 (v2)
+                            <br><br>This privacy policy explains how your personal information is processed when using our products like the Complementary Development website, Complementary shader packs, and the Complementary Installer. As a commitment to transparency and continuous improvement, we may periodically update this Privacy Policy for legal compliance, to refine its wording, add information regarding new products, and for similar purposes.</p>
                         <h3>User Information Gathering</h3>
-                            <p>It's important to state that "we" simply do not collect any user information directly from our products. But there are third-party services that our products use that can collect anonymous user data for valid reasons. The third-party services in question are developed by people that have nothing to do with us, and they can not be fully covered by our privacy policy. We will help you understand what services we are using, how/why are we using them, and point you to their privacy policies for you to be able to further evaluate how they handle your information.</p>
+                            <p>It's important to clarify that we do not directly collect any user information from our products. But we acknowledge that certain third-party services that our products use may gather anonymous user data for valid reasons. These third-party services are developed independently from us, and they can not be fully covered by our privacy policy. We will help you understand what services we are using, how/why are we using them, and point you to their privacy policies for you to be able to further evaluate how they handle your information.</p>
                         <h3>Third-Party Services</h3>
                             <p>The following services that we use with our products may collect user information:
-                            <br>- Google Services: The Complementarty Development website uses Google services, such as Google Analytics and Google Ads. Google may collect certain non-personal information for reasons like analyzing website traffic and evaluating performance. The reason we use Google services is because they are an easy choice to put ads on a website, and their tools geniunely help us improve the user experience. For more information about how Google services handle your information, please refer to their privacy policy.
-                            <br>- Github Services: The Complementary Installer uses Github to host important files, and Github collects anonymous information about downloads. For more information about how Github handles your download data, please refer to their privacy policy.
-                            <br>- External Links: Our products may contain links to external websites. We are not responsible for the privacy practices or content of those websites. Please review the privacy policies of those services before providing any personal information.</p>
+                            <br>- Google Services: The Complementarty Development website utilizes Google services, such as Google Analytics and Google Ads. Google may collect certain non-personal information for reasons like analyzing website traffic and evaluating performance. We opt for Google services due to their suitability in displaying website ads and the genuine enhancement they offer to the user experience. To gain comprehensive insight about Google's treatment of your information, we encourage you to review their privacy policy.
+                            <br>- Github Services: The Complementary Installer uses Github to host important files, and Github collects anonymous information about downloads. For more information about how Github handles your download data, we recommend referencing their privacy policy.
+                            <br>- External Links: Our products may contain links to external websites. We emphasize that we disclaim any responsibility for the privacy practices of these external websites. We advise reviewing their respective privacy policies prior to providing any personal information on such sites.</p>
                         <h3>Contact Us</h3>
-                            <p>If you have any questions or concerns regarding our Privacy Policy, please feel free to contact us.
+                            <p>For any inquiries or concerns regarding our Privacy Policy, please do not hesitate to reach out to us.
                             <br><a href="/contact">complementary.dev\contact</a><br><br></p>
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