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_data/discordQuestions/cantSeePresentation.yaml

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name: "cantSeePresentation"
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question: "I can't see the presentation!"
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answer: "<p>
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Click on the channel name (on the left of the screen) and you will see everyone's' pictures. One of them will have a
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Click on the channel name (on the left of the screen) and you will see everyone's pictures. One of them will have a
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button saying \"Watch Stream\". Click this button.
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<img class=\"discord-image mg-fluid\" width=\"300\" src=\"../images/discord/discord-watch-stream.png\">
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</p>

discord.html

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<h2>Before the event</h2>
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<p>
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There are lots of ways to join us, but the most reliable method is to use a
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proper computer or laptop, and log into Discord in Microsoft Edge or Google Chrome.
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'proper' computer or laptop, and log into Discord in Microsoft Edge or Google Chrome.
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Safari does <b>not</b> work.
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</p>
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you are not sure, feel free to contact the organisers via the <a href="{{site.url}}\contact">contact us</a> page.
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</p>
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<p>
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Dont worry, you wont need to install anything! The webinar will be hosted on CodeWith's Discord server. You simply
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Don't worry, you won't need to install anything! The webinar will be hosted on CodeWith's Discord server. You simply
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follow the link in the email which will open
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up in a web browser.
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</p>
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<p>Once you are logged in (either by signing up or using an existing account) you can select a channel by clicking on
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it's name on the left of the screen. </p>
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its name on the left of the screen. </p>
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<p>
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Your browser might ask if Discord can use your microphone. Click <b>Allow</b> – dont
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worry, you can turn them off whenever you like. Turning this on will allow you to ask questions
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Your browser might ask if Discord can use your microphone. Click <b>Allow</b> – don't
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worry, you can turn it off whenever you like. Turning this on will allow you to ask questions
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using your microphone during intervals.
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<img class="discord-image img-fluid" src="../images/discord/discord-microphone.png">
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<p>
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If you would like to use your webcam on Discord, select the video button. It will open another digalog box. Click
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If you would like to use your webcam on Discord, select the video button. It will open another dialog box. Click
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<b>Allow</b> – don’t
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worry, you can turn them off whenever you like.
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worry, you can turn it off whenever you like.
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To join the channel click the name, it will look something like this:</p>
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<img class="discord-image img-fluid" src="../images/discord/discord-call.png">
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Turn <b>off</b> your <b>microphone</b>. This is very important! You should
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keep your microphone muted throughout the session.
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<img class="discord-image img-fluid" src="../images/discord/discord-buttons.png">
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Finally, make sure you still have your <b>microphone</b> muted. You can also
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click on the <b>Event Chat</b> channel to use text chat. You can use this to ask questions
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You can click on the <b>Event Chat</b> channel to use text chat. You can use this to ask questions
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throughout the session. The host may answer during the session, or one of the mentors
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may respond in the Event Chat.
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events.html

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understand the community&apos;s shared values and provides clear guidelines on how we should behave.
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<p>Attending an online event? Check out our <a href="{{site.url}}/discord">Discord guide</a></p>
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<p>Attending an online event? Check out our <a href="{{site.url}}/discord">Discord guide</a>.</p>
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<h2>Previous Events</h2>
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<p>

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